Sorrow

Tanka written by LilShiro59 on Wednesday 3, November 2010

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English Class Assignment. (again)

Overall Rating: 88%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 88% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:90%
Imagery:87.5%
Spelling & Grammar:87.5%
Flow/Rhythm:87.5%
Vocabulary:87.5%
Droplets falling down, Streaming down a face of pain. Sad eyes burning red. Fruitless attempts to stop them. Sorrow controls falling tears.
   

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    Almost feels like it should have gone with Smiles.
    I second that Don.
    Very nice.