Envy

Tanka written by LilShiro59 on Wednesday 3, November 2010

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English Class Assignment. I like these though.

Overall Rating: 88.5%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 88.5% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:90%
Imagery:87.5%
Spelling & Grammar:90%
Flow/Rhythm:87.5%
Vocabulary:87.5%
The open night sky, Shining dew on the flowers, Wind blowing them about, Their beauty and grace unmatched. Envy glows as they are watched.
   

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    Very nice.
    Interesting how you handle this. Good job.