Longing for Sleep

Poem written by Invisible Heroine on Thursday 9, September 2010

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I want to go to sleep so bad

Overall Rating: 88%

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I'm longing for sleep. I want to melt out of my skin. I want to be like sleeping beauty, sleep for years, Wake up a new me. I wish the seconds would go by faster. but instead they fall away slow, Like their mocking, Mocking that I'll forever be stuck in this Body.
   

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    We're all stuck with what we have. It's what we make of it that counts.
    Nice. But not forever. Only until you die.