Father

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You were my father once
Until she took you away from me
I understand you need a wife
But I'm your daughter and I need a father
I rarely get to see you and
When I do it's like I'm not even there
I feel like I've lost my father
And it's all because of her
She took my father away
And it's like she doesn't even care
You are still in my head
Even though you're never there
When I need a father
You'd rather be with her
But when you need a daughter
I am always there
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-- Margaret Dabble
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