Desert

Description
My first attempt at Haiku.This writing has been rated by 6 members, resulting in a rating of 92.633333333333% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
Concept/Plot: | 90.333333333333% |
Imagery: | 92.333333333333% |
Spelling & Grammar: | 98.333333333333% |
Flow/Rhythm: | 89.166666666667% |
Vocabulary: | 93% |
Hot, arid, dry heat.
Summers deadly shadow looms.
The vulture eats soon.