Tanka #1

Tanka written by Mythbhavd on Tuesday 18, July 2006

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My first attempt at a Tanka

Overall Rating: 90%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 90% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:90%
Imagery:90%
Spelling & Grammar:90%
Flow/Rhythm:90%
Vocabulary:90%
I sit in darkness Thinking of my lover's arms Heart beating wildly Thunder welling up inside Gives way to soft gentle love -MMC ©2006
   

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