Tanka #1

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My first attempt at a TankaThis writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 90% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
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Imagery: | 90% |
Spelling & Grammar: | 90% |
Flow/Rhythm: | 90% |
Vocabulary: | 90% |
I sit in darkness
Thinking of my lover's arms
Heart beating wildly
Thunder welling up inside
Gives way to soft gentle love
-MMC ©2006