Haiku

Description
First ever attempt at a HaikuThis writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 85% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
Concept/Plot: | 85% |
Imagery: | 85% |
Spelling & Grammar: | 85% |
Flow/Rhythm: | 85% |
Vocabulary: | 85% |
Pen touching paper
Thought taking flight in new form
Mown grass the perfume
-Matthew M. Coiner ©2006