Für Malicepoint

Rap written by AnEccentricKitty on Monday 31, May %19

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The games have begun

Overall Rating: 90.3%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 90.3% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:91.5%
Imagery:90%
Spelling & Grammar:92.5%
Flow/Rhythm:87.5%
Vocabulary:90%
Malicepoint, drop the joint 'cause you know you can't rhyme. Well, maybe you could if you just took the time to examine the lyrical famine that is takin' over your mind. Then and only then can you climb atop Mount Soliloquy, before I get up in your girl and direct her like a symphony. Livin' a life of boredom and antiquity, sometimes I feel stuck in the pages of history. And who are you calling pompous? You're the only one who's ego is humongous. Regular guy, my ass, you're almost as weird as me. At least I don't have jeans stained with pee.
   

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  • Please, no wrap....errrr....rap wars!
    - June 02 2010 02:34:24