Crush 2

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Another peice I've writtenThis writing has been rated by 4 members, resulting in a rating of 85.55% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
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All day, all I want to do is stare into his eyes . . . their sparkle is mesmerizing, somehow the light always find his eyes and they shine . . . it's like I'm searching for something, using his eyes as a passagway, looking into the depths of his sole . . . maybe to an answer, to an unknown question . . . I don't know