Pure

Poem written by Natasha on Monday 18, February 2002

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Problems have taken their pulpit, Stood high and laughed in our faces. But we've shattered what they thought was a forfeit, As we let trust shine with love to all high places. We've each been given our lovable titles, As well as being called THE best. You and I share something so strong and undestroyable, Like Our devotion, a golden sword that penetrates all the rest. Those things you say to me throughout the day, They will always be said once more. For I hold each word firmly so that I may, Say those same pledges to you now and forevermore. We always share in each other's strength, And we always cry in each other's pain. And yet we know each other will survive any obstacle at any length, For once together, we can get through hell, cold and rain.
   

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