Lost in time

Poem written by Dnavarre on Wednesday 24, March 2010

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written on the back of a literature assignment.

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This writing has been rated by 9 members, resulting in a rating of 94.688888888889% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

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    #11

    Rob KosyRob Kosy

    Great stuff.
    Loved the ending; "Who you are, what you do, now that my friends, is up to you".
    A good credo for life I think.
    Commented 25/03/2010 22:55
    #12

    kt6550kt6550

    Concerning Starfire's comment, you could claim poetic license.
    Commented 26/03/2010 00:59