Our Day

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As we stand here together,
Our eyes staring at the floor.
Our first moment with eachother,
We've never been through anything like this before.
Holding your hand,
A new feeling I can't explain.
It makes it's way throughout my shivering body,
It takes away all my pain.
I watch you closely,
Not knowing what to say.
Wanting to tell you I love you,
But my lips get numb as my breath looses it's way.
Night falls, another day is done,
Resting my head against your chest, I close my eyes.
It's my favourite dream come true,
As I hear you whisper to my ear,
"I Love You"
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