Our Day

Poem written by Natasha on Monday 18, February 2002

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As we stand here together, Our eyes staring at the floor. Our first moment with eachother, We've never been through anything like this before. Holding your hand, A new feeling I can't explain. It makes it's way throughout my shivering body, It takes away all my pain. I watch you closely, Not knowing what to say. Wanting to tell you I love you, But my lips get numb as my breath looses it's way. Night falls, another day is done, Resting my head against your chest, I close my eyes. It's my favourite dream come true, As I hear you whisper to my ear, "I Love You"
   

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