I Will, For You

Poem written by Natasha on Monday 18, February %4

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I will love you, for as long as my heart beats it's song. I will stand by you, so we may conquer our fears and keep each other strong. I will worry about you, for as long as life goes on. I will understand you, for everything you say as well as do, I feel it too. I will comfort you, when things seem though and you feel helpless. I will cry for you, for as long as tears are felt by pain or happiness. I will listen to you, when things get nuts and you need someone to talk to. I will trust you, for no matter what people say, "us" is who I stand for. I will never forget you, for you are on my mind now, and will be part of me, forevermore.
   

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