Kite

Poem written by Malicepoint on Thursday 24, December 2009

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Description
a cheering up poem

Overall Rating: 86.7%

This writing has been rated by 4 members, resulting in a rating of 86.7% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:86.5%
Imagery:87.5%
Spelling & Grammar:87.75%
Flow/Rhythm:88.5%
Vocabulary:83.25%
kite in the sky, so very high, blue all around, is the only thing that surrounds, clouds have no eyes, but they cry, ground so far down, that nothing can be found, the sun far above, it wishes to fly like a dove, soon the night swallows and all is changed, the only thing that follows is the kite thats in the sky
   

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