Perfection

Poem written by Malicepoint on Friday 18, December 2009

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Sin....Perfection?

Overall Rating: 93.1%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 93.1% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:92.5%
Imagery:93%
Spelling & Grammar:93%
Flow/Rhythm:93.5%
Vocabulary:93.5%
Blue lights reflecting the odds of time, But nothing can stop this endless crime, Wild games to be played for one's enjoyment, But to behold this is nothing, for we are sin, and sin is perfection.
   

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    This one is cool. Smile