Understand

Poem written by ladylunaivy on Thursday 17, December 2009

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I was haveing one of those days ... or something. Kind of in an odd state of mind. Well, needed to write before i freaked out and this is what happned. let me know what you think.

Overall Rating: 86.7%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 86.7% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:85.5%
Imagery:83.5%
Spelling & Grammar:93%
Flow/Rhythm:88%
Vocabulary:83.5%
You don't have to understand the things I do. Why I shun the light yet worship the dawn. Why I protect my enemies but let you bleed. The unknown defines all, just trust I will not let you fall. Believe. You don't have to understand the things I do. Why I cry in love yet laugh in hate. Why I would destroy myself for a pointless reason, but walk away when only my voice is needed. The unknown defines all, just trust I will not let you fall. Have faith. When all the angelic songs have been known, and a whispers fade beyond the realm of sound, then ; then you will understand.
   

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    #1

    VermithraxVermithrax

    This is cool Smile

    Nicely done.
    Commented 17/12/2009 04:41
    #2

    blue_veined_hatredblue_veined_hatred

    nice prose.thumbs up
    Commented 17/12/2009 04:54
    #3

    thepoetyoullneverknowthepoetyoullneverknow

    i thik that you did a very good job of putting the way that we all of feel once in a while into words, and the fact that your were able to do that i give you props because everyone wants to know exactly what theyre felling on those days that we all dread

    i enjoyed reading this
    Commented 23/12/2009 20:50