Understand

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I was haveing one of those days ... or something. Kind of in an odd state of mind. Well, needed to write before i freaked out and this is what happned. let me know what you think.This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 86.7% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
Concept/Plot: | 85.5% |
Imagery: | 83.5% |
Spelling & Grammar: | 93% |
Flow/Rhythm: | 88% |
Vocabulary: | 83.5% |
You don't have to understand the things I do. Why I shun the light yet worship the dawn. Why I protect my enemies but let you bleed. The unknown defines all, just trust I will not let you fall. Believe.
You don't have to understand the things I do. Why I cry in love yet laugh in hate. Why I would destroy myself for a pointless reason, but walk away when only my voice is needed. The unknown defines all, just trust I will not let you fall. Have faith.
When all the angelic songs have been known, and a whispers fade beyond the realm of sound, then ; then you will understand.
Nicely done.
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