To My True Love...

Poem written by Routh on Monday 18, February 2002

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A poem written for a loved one.

Overall Rating: 77%

This writing has been rated by 14 members, resulting in a rating of 77% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:79.928571428571%
Imagery:81.928571428571%
Spelling & Grammar:76%
Flow/Rhythm:76%
Vocabulary:71.142857142857%
Holding you is incredible Kissing you is a dream You are the most beautiful Thing I've ever seen Your freckles are so tiny Your eyes blue as a lake And when I see you smile It's the icing on the cake I'm afraid to show you too much love And at the same time not enough Cause too much love can smother And too little is pretty rough To find a perfect balance is A struggle inside of me And so I search high and low To find the perfect key And when I search I tend to stare And I get your what's and why's Just know these words are how I feel When I look into your eyes
   

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    #11

    NannyanziM256NannyanziM256

    The poem was quite easy to understand and they were a few amazing lines i liked like 'cause too much love can smother and too little is pretty tough'
    Commented 05/12/2017 10:10
    #12

    Lonelyhearts1224Lonelyhearts1224

    simple poetry, but very heart felt. Really wonderful to read.
    Commented 06/01/2019 18:54
    #13

    LilLil

    Like it, made me smile.
    Commented 25/03/2020 21:46