To My True Love...
Description
A poem written for a loved one.| This writing has been rated by 13 members, resulting in a rating of 75.538461538462% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results: | |
| Concept/Plot: | 78.846153846154% |
| Imagery: | 81.615384615385% |
| Spelling & Grammar: | 74.153846153846% |
| Flow/Rhythm: | 74.153846153846% |
| Vocabulary: | 68.923076923077% |
Holding you is incredible
Kissing you is a dream
You are the most beautiful
Thing I've ever seen
Your freckles are so tiny
Your eyes blue as a lake
And when I see you smile
It's the icing on the cake
I'm afraid to show you too much love
And at the same time not enough
Cause too much love can smother
And too little is pretty rough
To find a perfect balance is
A struggle inside of me
And so I search high and low
To find the perfect key
And when I search I tend to stare
And I get your what's and why's
Just know these words are how I feel
When I look into your eyes
NannyanziM256
