A Fateful Day Indeed

Poem written by Mythbhavd on Wednesday 20, May 2009

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Our First Date

Overall Rating: 91.8%

This writing has been rated by 3 members, resulting in a rating of 91.8% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:90%
Imagery:90%
Spelling & Grammar:92.333333333333%
Flow/Rhythm:93.333333333333%
Vocabulary:93.333333333333%
On a day cold and dreary A fateful day indeed In a restaurant warm and cheery We find two hearts in need Shy eyes meet across a table And they start to share And over lunch they find they're able Their tender hearts to bare A friendship true is born this day And though they do not know Two hearts entwine in a way That love begins to grow In the future they will learn They've finally met the one For whom their hearts for years have yearned Like flowers for the sun Let us leave our lovers now Their future bright ahead And one day soon they'll share their vows Two hearts as one will wed -mmc 12/2/08
   

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    A nice poem.
    Thanks. It was a fun one to write. Smile