Spring

Haiku written by Routh on Wednesday 29, April 2009

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A third go at a Haiku..

Overall Rating: 91.933333333333%

This writing has been rated by 3 members, resulting in a rating of 91.933333333333% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:93.333333333333%
Imagery:93.333333333333%
Spelling & Grammar:91.666666666667%
Flow/Rhythm:96.333333333333%
Vocabulary:85%
A flower opens, To the suns warming embrace. Life awakes again...
   

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    I'm not sure how you wanted the third line to go, but I always spread a word out, so I got 6 syllables there.

    But a good haiku...although it doesn't seem to hit me right.

    --edit--

    Wait, I kept reading "awakes" as "awakens" so it's 5.
    I do hate rating poetry.