My Angel

Poem written by Dnavarre on Friday 28, November 2008

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an old poem for my angel.

Overall Rating: 90.4%

This writing has been rated by 2 members, resulting in a rating of 90.4% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

Concept/Plot:91%
Imagery:91.5%
Spelling & Grammar:94%
Flow/Rhythm:85.5%
Vocabulary:90%
Sleep little angel, drift away, I'll be here, everyday. Watch the sky and stars, through a telescope, look at mars. Sleep little angel, lay with me in bed, on my chest, rest your head. Watch the ocean waves come near, swim in the waters, lose your fear. Watch the lightning bolts come down; there are dark clouds above, and a booming sound. Drift, my angel, drift away, wake with me, another day. Watch the trees, swaying gently; watch the leaves slowly fall free. Don your wings, go to the sky, my sleeping angel now can fly.
   

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    You need to recite or sing this with an acoustic guitar for accompaniment.