The Nature in it all

Story written by Dnavarre on Friday 28, November 2008

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short poem

Overall Rating: 90%

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The ocean waves come crashing down, the water sprays across the ground. It tastes of salt and horrible things, But the animals 'round and the wind sings. The fire burns and takes it all, the leaves are flaming as they fall. The endless night goes on and on but that life in the world is now gone. The forest stands tall and pretty. the trash thrown in makes it look $hitty The green leaves blow in the wind, until the wind dies down again.
   

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