"Beyond the silk"

Sonnet written by fabellara01 on Tuesday 22, July 2008

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attraction with barriers

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"Beyond the silk" Her beauty is so rare In here, i take a stare Our eyes express we say She does not choose her way In times it's faith that bounds I know this words does sound Escape with me this time We hide like we are mimes Makes all insane it sounds In here with all the crowd I'd love to take away What all they have to say This fire i bury too deep In time she digs to keep
   

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