Big Ass

Haiku written by Freeman on Sunday 8, June 2008

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What I Saw

Overall Rating: 80%

This writing has been rated by 1 members, resulting in a rating of 80% overall. Below is a breakdown of these results:

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Flow/Rhythm:80%
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there it was walking alone not seen for a long time dress sense out of the window one of the biggest asses that i have seen for a while did not need a second look i knew that was you
   

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    Alright... I Just found this. Its not a haiku...

    Haikus follow a specific format. There is a specific syllable count for each line. 5-7-5...

    This is a prose..