The Itch

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A year has past
My heart's grown colder
Is it that old pain?
Or am I getting older?
My soul has emptied
My patience become weak
No one gets my heart now
Not even a peak
The words "I love you"
Are said without feeling
Without any sentiment
And without real meaning
No one knows who I've become
I don't even know me
The deepest of my wounds
Is the hardest to see
My heart has been buried
Deep in its own little shell
No willingness to care
Trapped in my own little hell
My only goal in life
Was to be a family man
But could I do that now?
I don't think I can
Everything I was
Destroyed by a bitch
Now all I want is loving
And nothing cures the itch...
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-- Dylan Thomas
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