Writing dialog the narator can only hear one side of...

Last updated on 2 years ago
enchantedpickles
enchantedpickles Posted 2 years ago
Is there a certain why to do this or does it matter how your writing style is?

I want to write dialog of someone talking on the phone but my narator can only hear the person she is with and not the person on the phone.
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Don Roble
Don Roble Posted 2 years ago
If the narrator is unable to hear it you can't tell it. Write the one side to be obvious in what is being said.

"You were hit by a rock?"
"Twenty-two stitches! Wow!"
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