Haiku by Mythbhavd

Last updated on 14 years ago
Sariel
Sariel Posted 14 years ago
very nice for a first attempt. You have the imagry down, and the sense of mystique that haiku craves. I'm quite impressed. Write some more.
~Matt!
"Life is funny. You start out with limitless potential, but time is constantly shaving away the possibilities. Every choice you make is the choice not to do a thousand other things."
Routh
Routh Posted 14 years ago
I also quite enjoyed this writing - I hope you write more, it will be nice to see more haiku on here
Chris Routh
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