Haiku by Mythbhavd

Last updated on 14 years ago
Sariel Posted 14 years ago
very nice for a first attempt. You have the imagry down, and the sense of mystique that haiku craves. I'm quite impressed. Write some more.
"Life is funny. You start out with limitless potential, but time is constantly shaving away the possibilities. Every choice you make is the choice not to do a thousand other things."
Routh Posted 14 years ago
I also quite enjoyed this writing - I hope you write more, it will be nice to see more haiku on here
Chris Routh
Founder of The Den of Amateur Writing

"Don't try to be a great man; just be a man and let history make its own judgments." - Riker, Star Trek The Next Generation
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