Little Bastard by Seanwhat

Last updated on 13 years ago
Mythbhavd
Mythbhavd Posted 13 years ago
Lol, I've gotta say, this is an excellent poem with a lot of morbid humor in it. The rhythm of the poem flows well and the rhyming pattern is excellent. I've gotta say, I really laughed when I read this one. I dunno. Maybe I've got a sick sense of humor, but good job Sean.

To read the poem: http://amateurwriting.net/infusions/w...ng&wid=203
Matt Coiner
Administrator and general goober

"The secret to writing is to write the first draft from your heart and the second from your head." - William Forrester in Finding Forrester
last edited by Mythbhavd on 05-09-2006 23:46
Routh
Routh Posted 13 years ago
LMAO

I must have that same morbid humour, because I also enjoyed this one. In fact I was just mentioning that to Sean on messenger about 3 hours before you posted this.. kinda funny you made a post about shortly after.
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