Alone I'll Be by TerrisMist

Last updated on 14 years ago
Mythbhavd
Mythbhavd Posted 14 years ago
Interesting poem. It's short, sweet, and to the point. I enjoyed it. The only suggestion I'd make is that I'd put "I shall be" on one line and "locked away for eternity" on the next. Good poem, though.

To read the poem: http://amateurwriting.net/infusions/w...ng&wid=317
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